allendalepharm Chapter 335: 1 Leaf Blindness, Special Treatment
Chapter 335: 1 Leaf Blindness, Special Treatment
After Instructor Qian finished assigning the policy questions, Jiang Youzhen began to think about it.
The sun set and it soon became the time of Shenshi. The time for the students to leave the government school was Shenshi.
As soon as he heard the bell ringing, Jiang Youzhen began to pack his bookcase and prepare to go back.
"Where does Junior Brother live? Is it on the same route for us?"
After a day, Zhong Wende had become very familiar with Jiang Youzhen.
"I live in Mingluo Lane in the north city!" Jiang Youzhen said.
"Huh? Then we live close to each other! I also live in Mingluo Lane in the north city, but why haven't I seen you before? Did you just move in? Or are you renting a place there?" Zhong Wende's eyes lit up and he thought it was such a coincidence.
After spending time with him today, he felt that Jiang Youzhen looked cold, but he was not that difficult to get along with. On the contrary, he had good character and was not arrogant.
“A rented yard!”
"Then let's go back together! I didn't come here by carriage today, so I'll take your carriage."
Luo Sheng looked at the two people's backs as they left and snorted with disdain.
What's the point of hanging out with someone like Zhong Wende who doesn't want to make progress? He always ranks last in the monthly exams. Birds of a feather flock together!
After Jiang Youzhen returned, Wen Ruyu couldn't wait to ask him about his feelings about studying at the provincial school today.
"It's quite free. The instructor is knowledgeable and his lectures are interesting. He also assigned me a policy paper today, and I have almost finished writing it."
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The next morning, Wen Ruyu went to Zhanglu Academy to take the exam, while Jiang Youzhen entered the provincial school.
As soon as Director Qian arrived, he went straight to Jiang Youzhen's seat, took Jiang Youzhen's article, stood there and began to read it carefully.
There was admiration in his eyes. It had been a long time since he was so impressed by a student's article.
Jiang Youzhen's writing style is indeed grand and makes people feel excited.
"Not bad!" Director Qian couldn't help but smile.
"It's just that I think it's not good enough! Your writing style is very strong and can resonate with readers. But you have to know that a good article can't just have climaxes, but needs ups and downs to be fascinating and memorable."
After Qian Xundao finished speaking, he noticed Jiang Youzhen's expression of sudden enlightenment, and knew that she had an epiphany.
Jiang Youzhen finally understood where his shortcomings were. Just like the plot of a story, if it keeps climaxing, it will make people tired. On the contrary, if it is properly relaxed, people's mood will rise and fall, and it will not be boring.
"I have learned some insights from this lesson. Thank you for your guidance!" Jiang Youzhen expressed his sincere gratitude.
Jiang Youzhen's writing style is still immature. Director Qian knew that she had listened to him and nodded with satisfaction.
"There are always people better than you! You can't just work in isolation, you should learn from others' strengths. I recommend you to read Tong Huaian's articles. Although his words are simple, his writing style is long-lasting and makes people think deeply after reading it. I interpret it as returning to simplicity and nature!"
Didn't expect that Qian Xun had such a high opinion of Tong Huaian? Jiang Youzhen once again had a correct understanding of Tong Huaian! It seems that he is really capable, otherwise how could he win three prizes in a row?
"However, his articles also have shortcomings. They are still immature and cannot fully grasp the general direction of the article. His writing style requires readers to be patient. If the beginning of the article is not good, it will easily affect the subsequent reading."
Director Qian stroked his beard and said, "Your writing style is amazing from the beginning. You must maintain this. For a good article, both the beginning and the end are important."
His speech was very abstract. He did not point out in detail what was wrong with Jiang Youzhen's article or how it should be written. Instead, he gave some brief suggestions and let Jiang Youzhen figure out the truth himself.
"You two each have your own strengths, and what you need to do now is to absorb the strengths of others, integrate them, and make the transitions natural, so as to elevate yourself and your article."
After listening to Qian Xundao's words, Jiang Youzhen felt as if he had suddenly been enlightened.
She quickly said gratefully: "Thank you for your guidance, I will keep it in mind!"
"Yes! Tong Huaian's test papers from previous years can be borrowed from the library. He has always been in the top ten of the monthly rankings, so his papers can be borrowed."
After saying this, Teacher Qian turned around and went to the top of the table and began to explain today's topic to everyone.
Luo Sheng rolled his eyes at Jiang Youzhen. He asked Qian Xun to give him some special treatment right after he arrived. Is Jiang Youzhen a relative? There must be someone behind him.
How could Jiang Youzhen care about Luo Sheng at this moment? At this moment, she looked at the article in her hand again, and suddenly felt a little immature. It turned out that she was blinded by one leaf before, and she was really a little arrogant.
Inspiration flooded his mind and Jiang Youzhen picked up his pen and started writing again.
Zhong Wende only saw Jiang Youzhen writing furiously, writing non-stop. He sighed, "Look at him, he's already so good, yet he's still working so hard."
No way! Jiang Youzhen has worked so hard, so it makes no sense for me, who is not as good as Jiang Youzhen, to just lie down!
In this Dingzi No. 2 bookstore, he only likes Jiang Youzhen. If Jiang Youzhen is ranked at the top of the monthly list for two consecutive times, then won't he have to leave Dingzi No. 2?
As a senior brother, where can I put my face?
Thinking of this, Zhong Wende immediately sat up straight and started writing.
It was not until dusk that Jiang Youzhen finally polished the article and handed it to Qian Xundao.
When Qian Xun saw this, he realized that this was the same question he had given yesterday. He immediately picked it up and nodded as he read it.
"You are very smart and you understand things quickly!" Director Qian was very happy. This Jiang Youzhen was really a good seedling.
"Although there are still some flaws, the merits outweigh the flaws! In just one day, you have been able to master it. You are a promising talent!"
Teacher Qian looked at Jiang Youzhen who was humbly seeking advice, and suddenly something came to his mind.
"Starting tomorrow, after school, you will go to my dormitory every day to study for another hour. Your fellow apprentices entered school earlier than you, so if you want to catch up with them, you will naturally have to pay a price."
Is this a special treat for me? Jiang Youzhen was a little surprised.
"What? You don't want to?" Instructor Qian raised his eyebrows when he saw that Jiang Youzhen looked normal.
"The students would love it, but I feel a little embarrassed for disturbing the teacher's peace." Jiang Youzhen smiled shyly.
In fact, she was very happy in her heart, because the instructor of the prefectural school was of the eighth rank. His rank was not high, but the power behind him was not small.
Qian Chongen was born into the Qian family, a prestigious family in Jiangnan. Although it was only a side branch, a lean camel is bigger than a horse, and the Qian family still had a foothold in the court.
Today's Hanlin Academy Bachelor Qian Songyun is a member of the Qian family. Although Hanlin Academy Bachelor is only a fifth-rank official, the power of this official position is not small, and he is also a close minister of the emperor.
There is a saying that if you don't enter the Hanlin Academy, you won't enter the cabinet. If Jiang Youzhen plans to pursue a career in politics, he can't avoid the Hanlin Academy.
It is indeed easy for officials who are sent to other places to get promoted at the beginning, but it still depends on their political achievements. What could be better than being in the power center of Beijing?
Jiang Youzhen had made up her mind long before that she must enter the Hanlin Academy.
Although this place is a low-paying government office and one has to gain experience to get in, there is a high chance that one will be able to stay in the capital after the office is closed.